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Populus
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Wine bottle and glass looks amazing! The reflection of the grapes could be driven by a texture map to make it a little more irregular.
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truerender
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Very high quality picture remon_v!
I like it!
The problem to which I am referring to the developers in the details.
On your picture it is subtle, not dramatic.
Looking closely at my publication, you will understand what I mean.

http://render.otoy.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=27&t=25905
remon_v
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Oke I made some tweaks to the scene.
Going to make a X-mas card out of it :D
I think I've solved the problem truerender is talking about.
When I made those wineglasses I modelled the wine a little smaller to avoid overlapping faces.
In this render I made the wine intersect with the glass.
I also added 3 lights to the scene but not sure if I'll keep them or not.
I upped the max depth from 16 to 32, but only left it render for 4 hours (with 460m GPU) so there's a little bit of noise.
Please feel free to leave a comment or a suggestion.
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Tugpsx
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Awesome! Much improved. Regarding the foil. It appears to be embedded in the bottle. i don't get the feeling that it is wrapped around it. But non-the-less this is exquisite work.
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remon_v
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Thanks! in the previous images the foil had no thickness at all. This time I extruded it a tiny but out to give it a thickness.
I also applied a bump map to it.
In the last image I like the lighting better on the foil, which made it pop more.
Any tips on how to fix this?
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bepeg4d
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much better, as already said if you work on the grape it' perfect ;)
pay attention, the Chardonnay is white wine from white grapes ;)
ciao beppe

Edit:damn, i've not seen the second page :oops:
sorry, forget what i've wrote :lol:
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