Loft in the desert

[said]

Hello,

i have play a little bit with the octane settings.
My target was to create a realistic rendering, this is the result.

I'm always open for criticism and helpful tips.

I have used direct light + diffuse + HDRI, rendertime ~ 2 hour with one gtx 570

the first rendering looks okay if u dont zoom in but yea you see what i mean.
the second rendering is a little noisly not enough time (~ 1 hour) but without zoom in it is okay.

my favorite is the first render, i´ve invested more time in it.


greeting
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[tonycho]

I like the design and rendering
But the leaf on the second picture seem a bit strange

[steveps3]

The bump on the wooden floor is a bit too strong.

Great renders though

[mbetke]

I like it overall. Nice stuff and colors. The floor has bad scaling so the bumpmap looks out of place. All in all its to grainy and maybe a bit to much sharpened. THe outside desert view is a bit blurry too. So mostly small stuff to fix.
Maybe doing the outside with sharper shadows because its desert and more contrast.

[said]

Hello Guys,

thx for your comments and criticism.

@tonycho,

i think you are right the leaf on the wall is too much its looks really strange, thx.

@steveps3,

i sharp it in photoshop maybe too much but i think wood is not the best option for the floor maybe concrete looks nice.

@mbetke,

first of all thx for u criticism mbetke, it has helped me a lot, i have render it again with other floor texture and i think it looks much better now

I know it is noisily, but render and work with only one gtx 570 is hard but I think it is time to buy a second graphics card

finally i thank you all for you criticism i think the result looks better now, my favorite is the first one and the second one, the second one is sharper.


greeting
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