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alles17
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Hello, it's part of my diploma
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t_3
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alles17 wrote:Hello, it's part of my diploma
very cool (de-)construction concept!
the tree(s) texture looks a bit odd imo (maybe a little to pale and/or bright), but apart from that the rendering and overall composition is excellent...
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alles17
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Thanks, on horizont are HDR. Other trees are 3d.
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alles17 wrote:Thanks, on horizont are HDR. Other trees are 3d.
mh, i meant the two in the back of the building;
nonetheless great work - and not just the rendering. must make an impressive point to your diploma ;)
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That's very good man. Agree on the quality of the tree, you could improve it for this forum's profit :D perhaps it's just lacking a decent normal map
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alles17
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I think the trees should be more contrasting. Probably my monitor was not properly calibrated.
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This is so gorgeous, where do you get your textures? hdri?
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alles17
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Thanks, it's HDRI. (directligting) Concrete is a mix-material.
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[gk]
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Hi, some fun shapes.
Do yourself the favor and use zero tiling textures, it shows.
Copy stamped parts around and make sure that non of the splotches in the concrete turns the same way on the new copies of the texture.
Just heads up!
Metal looks good, clouds are fine. Dont like the composition on the last one.
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Looks like real stuff - I didn't really notice the tiling textures until you mentioned, still always a good advice..
only thing is - I don't think the glass is going to be so very clear and brand new in that kind of environment - add some dirtyness to glass and nobody will have any idea it's CG :)
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