This is a remake from a project a wasn't really satisfied. Now I have have tryed to take every detail in account.
C&C are very welcome
Dining room
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mib2berlin
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To much wood in my opinion, but very realistic render.
The bottleneck looks not correct and the plant is grey, but I lik the yello.
And the lamp is enormous.
Take more of these chairs.
Cheers mib
The bottleneck looks not correct and the plant is grey, but I lik the yello.
And the lamp is enormous.
Take more of these chairs.
Cheers mib
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The continuity in the kitchen wood bothers me, all the doors are diferent, if you can make something like this:
http://www.furniturefashion.com/image/2 ... Design.jpg
http://www.furniturefashion.com/image/2 ... Design.jpg
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i really like the atmosphere of the first pic.
as mib already mentioned the scale of the lamp looks strange. additionally you could raise the sub-div level to avoid visible edges. maybe just downscaling would last.
2nd pic: the white chair is kind of full white while the backround is a little to dark. btw i dont like the "mahogany" chair variant, the other one is awesome;)
..just details.
cheers dave
as mib already mentioned the scale of the lamp looks strange. additionally you could raise the sub-div level to avoid visible edges. maybe just downscaling would last.
2nd pic: the white chair is kind of full white while the backround is a little to dark. btw i dont like the "mahogany" chair variant, the other one is awesome;)
..just details.
cheers dave
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I like your style very much 
nice work. all though your second render is a bit bleached out a bit
nice work. all though your second render is a bit bleached out a bit
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dave62 wrote:i really like the atmosphere of the first pic.
as mib already mentioned the scale of the lamp looks strange. additionally you could raise the sub-div level to avoid visible edges. maybe just downscaling would last.
2nd pic: the white chair is kind of full white while the backround is a little to dark. btw i dont like the "mahogany" chair variant, the other one is awesome;)
..just details.
cheers dave
@dave62,mib2berlin: my girlfriend was so angry i changed the wood on the chairsmib2berlin wrote:To much wood in my opinion, but very realistic render.
The bottleneck looks not correct and the plant is grey, but I lik the yello.
And the lamp is enormous.
Take more of these chairs.
Cheers mib
But i'm doing the renders for my portfolio and i have already used the wood elswhere, I thought i could change it...Wrong!The 2 lamps by the way (the other one just doesn't fit in well on the render) are just a a question of taste the room is very big and I felt it would be a good counterpoint. The interpolation is a good one thx for the heads up.
I've put two PS versions one with lamp one without....I like both
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