yet another interior scene

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jnoftle123
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hey guys im chugging along on this scene and could really use some input

i just changed the floor a bit and placed it into a more finished render of it hence why the floor looks not fully rendered.
im going to increase the decrease the scale on the floor abit.

im running a 512mb 9600gt, so i desperately need to upgrade, takes a lifetime to render.

is the fact that there is no glass noticeable?

any crits or suggestions would be awesome.
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MaTtY631990
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A few objects on the table could do, maybe some fruit and a glass. Also try adjusting the gamma and exposure controls as it's to dark, and you should be on your way. ;)
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ROUBAL
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Nice scene. I noticed a little problem with the Alpha of the cut-out character : the background can be seen slightly through the character !

Check your alpha texture (maybe it is not full black and full white), or the opacity slider value.
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