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Final Interior Garage Old Car
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visuall
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Critics are welcome !!
Et si il y a des francophones , je vous salue!!
Et si il y a des francophones , je vous salue!!
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- original size 3137x2378 Sky light only, [b]direct lighting[/b], glare blur spectral, ektacrome 64cd, gamma 2.2, white balance :FFFBC1, 1 hour with 2 x gtx 690 , photoshop post prod: duplicate layer, opacity screen, 50%
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Excellent work, I love the tonality and light, although the depth of field looks way heavier to me.
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Nice,
Some feedback as you asked:
DOF is probably too high like PAQUITO said. it gives a toy feeling to the image,
Reduce the aperture for ex.
The texture on the car bumper is pretty repeated quite obviously & it's quite visible.
The rest is pretty good! Well done.
Some feedback as you asked:
DOF is probably too high like PAQUITO said. it gives a toy feeling to the image,
Reduce the aperture for ex.
The texture on the car bumper is pretty repeated quite obviously & it's quite visible.
The rest is pretty good! Well done.
Last edited by icelaglace on Thu Apr 18, 2013 1:16 am, edited 1 time in total.
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I don´t agree with the aperture. It gives a nice and visually appealing look to that kind of images. In this particular case I think it works pretty nicely.
The bumper, yes, I see some tiling. Why are you using a texture there? I would put simply a chromy/metallic material.
The bumper, yes, I see some tiling. Why are you using a texture there? I would put simply a chromy/metallic material.
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visuall
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icelaglace wrote:Nice,
Some feedback as you asked:
DOF is probably too high like PAQUITO said. it gives a toy feeling to the image,
Reduce the aperture for ex.
The texture on the car bumper is pretty repeated quite obviously & it's quite visible.
The rest is pretty good! Well done.
Hello gentlemen, then according to your specifications, so I remade this picture, in fact, the chrome on the front was false, the dof down a little bit, because I'm a drug addict of dof.PAQUITO wrote:Excellent work, I love the tonality and light, although the depth of field looks way heavier to me.
the photographer is still in me haha!
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I think these are great!
what's not to like?
what's not to like?
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Great images. For my own, the only thing that I think looks weird is the chrome surface behind the front grille of the car.
It looks like there is no air input. I would put instead a pitch black diffuse rough material or some very dark mechanical details, just to suggest the motor, or a second dark grille.
It looks like there is no air input. I would put instead a pitch black diffuse rough material or some very dark mechanical details, just to suggest the motor, or a second dark grille.
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visuall
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C'est noté pour la prochaine version ! c'est pas faux!!ROUBAL wrote:Great images. For my own, the only thing that I think looks weird is the chrome surface behind the front grille of the car.
It looks like there is no air input. I would put instead a pitch black diffuse rough material or some very dark mechanical details, just to suggest the motor, or a second dark grille.
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I like both images, each one on its own style.
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