Restaurant Viz

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cadvis
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Hello All,

Restaurant Viz..

Some details:
- 600 passes
- Lighting : HDRI
- Kernel: PMC

PC spec:
-Win 7 64bit
-GTX570

Hope you will like it.
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Restaurant 000.jpg
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PAQUITO
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Is it a raw render or is there some retouch?
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cadvis
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Hi ~PAQUITO

Yes I did some retouch in gimp - simple color correction & light curves adjustment & blur (is it looks bad?)

I've added new version.

Hope you will like it.

Thanks
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Restaurant 001.jpg
paoloverona
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great job cadvis! ...as your usual.
I prefer the one with the sun (don't like too much the choice of using the same wood for the chairs...have you tried with something different or just a glossy black?)

Cheers, Paolo
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cadvis
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Thanks ~Paolo for you nice comment.

Yes you're right, probably I should add some difference in wood textures.

I will try to develop further this scene (add some new bits.. plates maybe) and then I'll hope to change wood textures.

Cheers.
MOSFET
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@cadvis: There is an issue with the scale of the scene. Either the background image is too large or the furniture is too small. For reference, compare the man standing on the balcony in relation to the contents of the room. The chairs need to be at least 1.5-2x their current size.
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ASyme1
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cadvis wrote:Hi ~PAQUITO

Yes I did some retouch in gimp - simple color correction & light curves adjustment & blur (is it looks bad?)

I've added new version.

Hope you will like it.

Thanks
This image looks about half done to me. The chairs are way too perfectly placed. Randomize the rotation on the Y a little. Also the mapping of the wood on the chairs is wrong. Wood doesn't look like that on that kind of object. Also, it needs a bunch more clutter of just random stuff to sell it as a real place.

Just my thoughts. It's getting there. Just not done to me yet.

Alec
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cadvis
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Hello,
Thanks for your comments are always welcome criticism.
I take into account it for the next scene, again thanks.

Much appreciated.
icehousecafe001
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Really nice creation mate and the scene is just perfect. Been thinking of restaurant as subject before and this is really a good work. Cheers.. I'm new here so I am looking around :)
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jbavar
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Really nice. Perhaps some table top items, cloths, flowers the usual things you would see in a restaurant would give that finished look. Perhaps even a couple of pictures on the walls and a potted plant or two as well. Just a suggestion.
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