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remon_v
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Hey guys,
Just a quick scene, to practise my materials.
All the materials are very simple setup. only the leave has mix material to get SSS working.

Comments and suggestions are welcome.
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MaTtY631990
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good setup and nice render :). Not sure about the pinkish color for the cap on the wine bottle, maybe stick with dark brown or black, not to distracting with color.
You might want to have a label on the bottle with make, type of wine ... etc. Also play a bit with vignetting on your image and see whether it improves it a bit more.
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good materials,
render time / samples ?
truerender
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As we can see, in a glass of wine the wrong index. Octane is not correct to consider the situation. When an object is one (only glass) all correctly.
Mates prelomlyayuschh objects when one object inside another - with an error.
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Thanks for the comments guys.
I'm going to make a label for it... just have to search for a nice one :D.
I started the render just before I went to bed and it wasn't clean yet so I left it render over night untill it reaches the max samples (16000).
I don't really understand your comment 'truerender,' are you talking about the black border in the whine bottle and the hight light?
I think I see the problem, but I'm not 100% sure. How can I fix this?
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remon_v
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Oke I worked on it a little more.. still have to improve some small thing.
Comments and nice idea's to impove the scene are very welcome.

I maxed out the samples to 16000 and took between 5 and 6 hours.
Mode PMC.

Truerender, there is now wine in the bottle (yet).
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Very nice. Add texture to the grapes and foil and your'e all good.
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MaTtY631990
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Impressive :)
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Thanks guys.
Will add some textures to the grapes and foil.
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