(my first post in this forum
)What is your opinion on this render?
Cup off coffee
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MaTtY631990
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Good for a first test. A few things you can change for the scene are the lighting, reduce the reflection on the plate and add a slight more roughness and the surface texture, perhaps wood.
see this link for some hdr images.
http://ict.debevec.org/~debevec/Probes/
see this link for some hdr images.
http://ict.debevec.org/~debevec/Probes/
excellent first render.. check on how to improve antialiasing and reduce graininess.. render on a higher res then reduce it to half or more - you get a 50% clearer image..
play with the tonemapping.. needs just a bit more warmth around the edges..
play with the tonemapping.. needs just a bit more warmth around the edges..
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Good work Piernik.
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telemmaite
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Nice result. Something about the reflectivity of the cream bothers me. Maybe a very slight bump map of the cream to dissipate that ?
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yes you're right, something is wrong, but I want to get ground coffee with milk, without the foam.telemmaite wrote:Nice result. Something about the reflectivity of the cream bothers me. Maybe a very slight bump map of the cream to dissipate that ?
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