Retirement homes

[richardo32]

hello

Another few exterior renders. I must say i am blown away with the new AI lights and
denoising functions in octane 4.

Thanks Otoy!

Best

Richardo.

https://www.behance.net/richardoqu37cf

[FrankPooleFloating]

Richardo, there are some things to admire here.. you clearly put so much work into these images. Add some eaves and fascia and these will be so much better. It's an easy fix. Plus you’ll get some added depth and new shadows out of the deal. Maybe add some bump or normals to your shingles too. They totally look flat in night render. Oh, and look into ridge caps too. Without those, water would surely get under your shingles, making them practically useless.

[Daniel_Ward]

Well done Ricardo,

First 4 images are excellent.

Architecutral illustrating is about capturing and expressing the feel and emotion of the design, to seduce the viewer and engage them into the concept.

Whether the reality ends up getting festooned with fascia's, bargess and ridge cappings, or get detailed out in the detailed design phase, shouldn't get in the way of telling a great story in the conceptual phase.

[richardo32]

hi guy's

thanks for the comments

i have been working in the building indusrty for over 30 years now and i know how a building goes together )
i appreciate every point you made here Frank but when you have a deadline and the client is on your back, these
little, all be it important details, get left out.

here are some more detailed renders, maybe you can find something i left out here?

viewtopic.php?f=5&t=68245


Richardo

[FrankPooleFloating]

I honestly mistook you for a student or something, but I see from the other page that you are not... Maybe you should consider putting roughs in the Works In Progress section.

[richardo32]

Thank you ameliaharry654

FrankPooleFloating:

) Yes i have those clients too that want every detail correct but i also have clients that are not interested in the tiny details
as they know the details will change by the time the project gets built. Different horses for different courses i guess Thats the bilders
and then you have the architects who want something totally different again.

I think Daniel_Ward put it quite eloquently above.

Best

Richardo

[Notiusweb]

I will make a very brash and harsh comment, but very superficial-
the 1st 2 images have too much bloom...
well, unless you were going for a fog look...which in that case, they look perfect.

The other 3 look photo-real, awesome!

[richardo32]

thanks Notiusweb

yes was going for a foggy look. was hard to control the look of it though,
will be alot easier in the next release i guess.

richardo