Architectural Exterior Scene

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KAMISI
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Hello, I would like to share my first Octane Rendering - work is still in progress, thank you for any comments.
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about 30 min. gtx 570
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steveps3
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very nice indeed. Your grey texture needs smoothing though. You can see the individual faces.
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KAMISI
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Did not know before that you can smooth via textures. Thank you.
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ribrahomedesign
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good start.
one big thing , the tables and chairs are far to small in comparison with the door and the cars.
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adiarc
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I would use glossy material for the cars and try making the leaves darker green. Also if you are not using path tracing, try it. Sometimes it makes an outdoor scene better, sometimes not.
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KAMISI
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So here comes the next try. @ribrahomedesin: the cars were much too big, cant believe I didnt see that before :roll: @adiarc, yes, I think the trees look much better now. cars still need some changes.
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about 40 min. 1600 s/px
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adiarc
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It's very dark now. You could try adding some exposure. And what happened to the ground floor textures? Also the street material was better before. Getting there! ;)
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steveps3
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It is starting to look really good now.

The cobbles on the ground look a bit too large and I think the building needs a bit of texture. At the moment everything is just too flat.

A few more tweaks and this will start to get pretty photo realistic.
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sam75
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you must have a problem with your screen settings, this is way too dark
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KAMISI
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Thanks for your support. I really had to change some screen settings! So here is the final result - hope you like it.
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