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marcohl
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and no more ugly got something to do, I made my face ..
I have a week working on the model, and lacks enough ..
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Last edited by marcohl on Tue Apr 05, 2011 6:56 am, edited 1 time in total.
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steveps3
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the textures are really good. I feel like I almost know you.
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marcohl
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steveps3 thanks for your feedback. the texture is real, my face.
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colorlabs
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Those low-poly artifacts around the curves of your nose are pretty bad. I wish they would fix that! You could try subdividing the mesh...how many polys is it now?
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colorlabs
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Also the texture looks pretty low res. Do you have a bump map and spec map? I haven't done this but a friend of mine is working on a face so I hear a bit about it. He used this tutorial:

http://www.ten24.info/index.php/shop/ch ... atient-35/
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marcohl
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Colorlabs thanks for the feedback, I'll review the tutorial.
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DayVids
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did you use path tracing? it looks like it might be direct lighting.

never done a face so I got no room to comment on the modeling.
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