Bedroom

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gman1995
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Joined: Thu Jan 20, 2011 9:54 pm

Hello everyone! This is my first post and my first render using Octane. To be honest, im not really proud of this work, but i really didnt know where to go with it. Your critique is very apreciated!
Thanks
Garret
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gaua
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Joined: Sun Jul 11, 2010 7:37 am

Play with sun. I think it is too dark inside. Mayby add glass to windows(reflections make it more interesting). Work with materials(more glossy?)
And test it. Octane offers quick renders so you can do a lot of previews.
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Joined: Mon Dec 20, 2010 12:57 pm

you have problem with scale
windows are too close to the floor,and bed looks very big

try take some blueprints of rooms on google ;)
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dave62
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like number said, check your proportions: the windows and their positions, the pillows and the bed, ...

just look into your room at home:)
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gman1995
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Thanks Everyone! I need all the help i can get.
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