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t0m4sk0
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pls, write your opinion

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Mateuet
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Nice mood, pretty clean. Maybe some bump on the floor tiles and the walls would help, they seem too regular to me.
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teecee2107
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The ground seems made of some kind of neoprene. The rest is really nice.
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t0m4sk0
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you are right, floor is without texture, also walls, it is work in progress,
i will up here final pictures, when we finish this interior project.

..thanx for replies
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t0m4sk0
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This scene has a lot of potential, I'd try to place some modern art on the metal sheet covered walls.
Love the colourscheme :)

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vimaxus
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Great work but a couple of cc;

The metal sheet covered wall should have divisions, It doesn't look very real as I doubt anyone will use sheets this big, especially as they are continuous around corners.

The dof is way too much. If you do actual photography you know that it's impossible to get that dof in real life with wide angle lens. even with a f/1.4 which is exaggerated when it comes to wide lens it's nowhere near that strong.
t0m4sk0
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Tiles on the wall, lights and furniture are real products which we chose for our interior design project, hence the design is influenced by available sortiment.
thanx for comments, we work with octane only 2 months so every comment is helpful.

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Daniel
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The last one looks great, although it appears the floor is solid black.
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