Hello everyone ,
I wanted to ask a help to improve a job I'm doing in this period.
I do not know what, but omitting materials that are still in the process of decision , something does not convince me and for this I have to ask you for help.
The scene is quite complete ?
The modeling requires other details ?
The light is?
The point of view ( 2-3 ) is ok or would you change anything ?
Comments and criticisms are welcome!!
Bye bye
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MaTtY631990
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Hi Daniel79
This looks good but can be improved. Here are a couple of things you can try.
1. try brighter colors and/or improve lighting in the scene. Maybe try different lighting for the scene ie. no sunlight ( HDR or skydome ). Take a look at Ikea shots for some inspiration.
check this link for kitchens: http://www.ikea.com/gb/en/catalog/categ ... s/kitchen/
2. avoid getting a blurry image and try to recover the details in your scene. Lacking sharpness.
I am not too sure about the wood texture chosen for the shelf on the wall. Try with the wood texture you use for ceiling supports or find a better texture, or are you yet to finish this.
Hope this helps and looking forward to an update
This looks good but can be improved. Here are a couple of things you can try.
1. try brighter colors and/or improve lighting in the scene. Maybe try different lighting for the scene ie. no sunlight ( HDR or skydome ). Take a look at Ikea shots for some inspiration.
check this link for kitchens: http://www.ikea.com/gb/en/catalog/categ ... s/kitchen/
2. avoid getting a blurry image and try to recover the details in your scene. Lacking sharpness.
I am not too sure about the wood texture chosen for the shelf on the wall. Try with the wood texture you use for ceiling supports or find a better texture, or are you yet to finish this.
Hope this helps and looking forward to an update
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FrankPooleFloating
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I smiled when I saw the shelf too. It is OSB. It would be right at home in some bachelor pad that has an electric cable spool as the coffee table.
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Here are my general thoughts.
Didn't comment on the missing textures and stuff that i believe you are aware of already.
Composition overall:
I think you need to draw the eye towards the kitchen/dining area, since thats the main subject.
Didn't comment on the missing textures and stuff that i believe you are aware of already.
Composition overall:
I think you need to draw the eye towards the kitchen/dining area, since thats the main subject.
a small update...
there are few errors of modelling...but i working to remove this.
The image is low resolution excuse me
there are few errors of modelling...but i working to remove this.
The image is low resolution excuse me
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. Very good indeed.
Let it cook some longer, longer rendertime.
Also I would play with the gamma and ISO settings!
Also I would play with the gamma and ISO settings!
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Just a little update regarding light , materials and above all, a bit of post processing to increase AO , exposure , etc ...
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