Lone Autumn Chestnut at sunset

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xxdanbrowne
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I made the tree in Vue, leaves and bark texture are photos rejigged in photoshop.

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kayze
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Its a tad bit dark. As if the sun has already set. I would take back the sun a bit and increase the light try to get that golden sunset to make it a bit more interesting.
Also take a look at speedtree its great for making quick trees. And then you dont need to make those intersecting planes.

I also come to think of that maybe composition wise, you would want to move the cam back to see a bit more setting to make it more interesting. Maybe the tree sits alone ontop of a hill or something...
xxdanbrowne
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Thanks Kayze.
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