OctaneBench entry - Blocky Tunnel | Final version

[shruszka]

Ok, so here is my entry:
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Update: Just finished the final version:



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  WIP2
  

I think it looks cool
It is still WIP and I will add some more stuff to it
Tell me if you like it!

Cheers,
Shruszka

[eidy]

I like it !
It's like a dream / funnel of dreams! Very nicely done

I'm just a little worried about the OCTANE RENDER logo as it appears very flat (2D insertion like)
I'm eager to see the final version Best of inspiration

[shruszka]

Another wip. I thought the first 2 wips were kinda too messy, so I simplified the scene a little.


I hope you like it!

Cheers,
shruszka

[eidy]

Yes, it looks better / clearer
Good job
I still think some slight make-up to that Octane logo would drive it to perfection ...
I don't know what exactly - maybe try a strong post processing glow on it ?! (so it doesn't look so sharp and flat ... )

Nice work
eidy

[shruszka]

Ok, another shot.
I made some kind of a background ( it looked kinda boring without any) and tried to improve the Octane logo.



I think I'm getting close to final version.
I hope you like it!

Cheers,
Shruszka

[eidy]

The Octane logo looks better
I would easy up just a little on the background presence

Good work!
Bye,
eidy

[shruszka]

Hey, I've just finished the final version:



So.. yeah. I hope you like it!
Also, thanks to eidy for his tips.

Cheers,
Shruszka

[eidy]

Very nice work
You're very welcome
I only hope my tips were indeed helpful - we'll just have to wait on the jury for that, I guess

All best,
eidy

[shruszka]

Oh, and here's the download: