Another Interior Shoot

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cadvis
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Hello,

Another interior viz....
Hope you will like it.

Render - PMC 400passes
Background and color correction - Gimp

Hope you will like it.
Thanks
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paoloverona
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I don't like too much this scene Cadvis, I couldn't find too much sense in that biiiiiiig window :D , maybe a different background image could give a different impact.

I like the wood shaders (floor and chairs), not too much the one of the cushions.

Cheers, Paolo
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jan kudelasek
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hi,

there is bad horizont line. It make whole image unrealistic for first look.

Jan
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cadvis
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Thanks for your comments - it's really good to hear some critique. Hope to not make this mistakes with my next viz.

Thanks.
Much appreciated.
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PAQUITO
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I agree, having that negative space right in the focal point, but having it empty looks odd, that´s the point. We should see some beautiful cityscape or something, or maybe a flat wall with a nice ink wallpaper, or else using that image for a magazine cover where you put a big headline in that space. I think that´s the cause of it to look strange.

Other than that, the materials and lightning looks gorgeous.
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cadvis
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Thanks ~PAQUITO for your reply.

Thanks
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