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Looks like your walls are over exposed. In my experience, this is usually caused by the walls being too white.
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I don't think the people added is making the visual better, because it is too obvious they are added later and the light on the people doesn't match the scene. The orange line on the ground is very distractive. I am curious to your next enhanced post... It has potential but needs some work though. Maybe the air around the house can be more while now the house is very narrow in your layout
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I would suggest zooming out slightly. The fence on the right hand side is getting cut off, and I feel that showing more sky might balance the image a bit more.
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