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eagle1986
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Hello folks,
we have just try out our first :!: rendering with octanerender and want to kindly ask for your opinion about the quality.

Many thanks for any constructive improvement suggestions, tips&tricks :D

This is what we did:
Take a ready-to-use model and placed some trees (with tree[d]) in 3ds Max
Make grass with Pflow and Mesh baker script in 3ds Max
Put materials in octanerender and make the settings
Set a background in Photoshop (ok, we know this is a very bad one. Anyone an idea where to get good background images?)

Render time with pathtracing setting: 1:30h
Resolution: 1600x800px
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First rendering with octanerender
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m_m_
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If possible, try to change the shot. (punto di vista)
Not high.
Height man. (altezza uomo)

If you can reduce size bump lower wall

Comunque: buon render

Bye
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nice setup..

there is a thread in resources on the forum loaded fully with free HDRIs.. look it up
- the trees don't look good, it always looks like its photoshopped in when it's on plane, the same with people that are pasted on cardboard cutouts - I would only use those to get the cardboard look intentionally..
- the grass would be better if it was bent randomly more - looks a bit like a raster,
add some growivy?
and maybe a bit more diffused light
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eagle1986
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Thank you very much for your tips so far :!:

I am working on it and will update you soon..
Furthermore I am thankful for any improvement suggestions, tips&tricks :D
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eagle1986
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Our new tryout.
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m_m_
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Do not know the purpose (scopo-finalità) of work ......
If you want, change the shadow in relation to the sun.
Search for a background image that will facilitate the inclusion.
Bye.
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eagle1986
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I have upload the new rendering without a background, to focus improvement suggestions on the model and environment.
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kavorka
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Check your trees, you have branches floating in the air, and at weird rotations.

Also, i think your leaves are too large.

Also, try to add some variation in the grass, and also some flowers or other grasses here and there.
maybe a rock or two.
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