Bullets and Apple

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john_petrucci
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Hello! my first rendering with octane, i have used procedural texture with 2.2 RC3 Version.
Thanks!
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Differents Texture Procedural.
Differents Texture Procedural.
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kubo
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dude.... an apple and some bullets, really?... what goes on in your head?... :lol: now, seriously, nice procedurals, it looks good, althou if I might complain, the bullets look a little too plastic, and maybe too new, how about another procedural for scratches? The apple skin looks tasty, hehehe
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Krisonrik
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it shouldn't look like a dent where the stem is coming out. It should be a smooth curve outward and then runs down the side profile of the apple shape itself. And I think the bullet would benefit more from detailed environment and some scratch marks. Even the brand new bullets were created through numerous cold press and scratching. metal just don't stay scratch free.
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john_petrucci
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Hello, i have modified the apple and added procedural for scratches on bullets ;)
Thanks!
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Fix Apple and procedural for scratches!
Fix Apple and procedural for scratches!
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radiance
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cool ;)
i'd try to give them a bit more yellow specular to give them a more coppery alloy, they look a bit like plastic now.

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john_petrucci
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Thank You!
This is my last Image ;)
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All Procedural Texture!
All Procedural Texture!
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