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I was wondering if any one can give me a critique on a rendering I drew-up in my spare time. It's still not complete (rather bare I must admit, thinking about what to add it without ruining the simplicity of the scene).
Cheers!
Boardroom Mockup
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Hello Draydin_r, although im starting to learn image composition i can point some things i would do if it was my scene.
hope it helps, if not... i hope it helps you assure in what yo really want.
here are the things i would do:
-work a bit more in the levels of the image (photoshop)
-remove the very brigth lighting of the wall behing the glass curtain, to me it draws away the attention from the room.
-move the chairs a bit, they are in complete perfect alignment... also the wheel structure of the chairs.
-put a transition element in the edge of intersection of the carpet floor and wall
-put a few (not much) accesories in the table like they were just finishing a meeting in the room.
-lower the intensity of the IES ligths, can it be done? just think that the light shapes are too strong. also i see some noise there... did you trie increasing the sample_rate of the small emiters.
have a nice time an good luck
hope it helps, if not... i hope it helps you assure in what yo really want.
here are the things i would do:
-work a bit more in the levels of the image (photoshop)
-remove the very brigth lighting of the wall behing the glass curtain, to me it draws away the attention from the room.
-move the chairs a bit, they are in complete perfect alignment... also the wheel structure of the chairs.
-put a transition element in the edge of intersection of the carpet floor and wall
-put a few (not much) accesories in the table like they were just finishing a meeting in the room.
-lower the intensity of the IES ligths, can it be done? just think that the light shapes are too strong. also i see some noise there... did you trie increasing the sample_rate of the small emiters.
have a nice time an good luck
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