Hi Everyone,
This is my last work a Jewish Museum in SP-Brazil.
I made with two kind of light and with PMC. Render Time more and less 2-3hs.
Let me know what do you think about it.
Thanks
Aleks Braz
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Jewish Museum
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Hi Aleks!
Wow, the first one really looks like a photo!
Except the cars...they look a bit to clean and artificial in some way... and the grass texture on the rooftop and below pops out... needs some bump and maybe a bit more desaturating of the green (like the trees).
And there are some wired lens distortions going on with the two right top buildings and the white in the middle background. Maybe you can correct it with photoshop and straighten it up?
But besides that, all the buildings look real, expecially the glasses of the museum. Are the background buildings actual photographs or rendered also?
For the evening shot: I think the lights have too much glow all over it, and you could darken and desaturate all the buildings in the background a bit more, to pop out the museum. How did you do the interior lighting of the museum??
Maybe a real nighttime shot would work better than an evening shot?
But overall great job!
Greetings,
ChrisVis
Wow, the first one really looks like a photo!
Except the cars...they look a bit to clean and artificial in some way... and the grass texture on the rooftop and below pops out... needs some bump and maybe a bit more desaturating of the green (like the trees).
And there are some wired lens distortions going on with the two right top buildings and the white in the middle background. Maybe you can correct it with photoshop and straighten it up?
But besides that, all the buildings look real, expecially the glasses of the museum. Are the background buildings actual photographs or rendered also?
For the evening shot: I think the lights have too much glow all over it, and you could darken and desaturate all the buildings in the background a bit more, to pop out the museum. How did you do the interior lighting of the museum??
Maybe a real nighttime shot would work better than an evening shot?
But overall great job!
Greetings,
ChrisVis
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perfect!
you should put some people billboards scattered with Forest Pack Pro inside the building.
you should put some people billboards scattered with Forest Pack Pro inside the building.
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