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mlody47
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still some things to do but not much already...

some shouldder tweaking + uv correction :(

only color correction added... and NOISE :D for more cinematic look... ;)

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thanks face ... about the bumps :oops:

my monitor working color profile is Adobe RGB .... ( Im telling that because on sRGB - it doesnt look good )



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hi!
beautiful artwork

put on the background an atomic mushroom cloud texture
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hey Gabriel.... thank You :)

I was thinking about mushroom cloud ofcourse.....but I thought it would be a little cliche.... ( I know that 90% of works here will have destroyed cities, mushroom clouds and all this mayhem thing :) - Iam always trying to make something that viewer of the image would think , what I had on my mind...

so I have one idea coming.... but I am about correcting all the bugs... and leave the interpretation to the viewer :) and Ill try to make some more renderings for the competition..... because I WANT it to end on 31st january.... even if that means that I have to make 20 of them....

but Thanks again... I will try this

have a nice day :)
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mlody47 wrote:.... even if that means that I have to make 20 of them....
:lol: you do know that there aren't so many prizes, right? ;P
I love the mood, it creates an uncomfortable feeling in me, of emptiness, and end, like somebody has already said goodbye to his loved ones and doesn't expect much of what is to come... dunno how quite to express it, but that's why I think it's so good, so if you "touch" it, make it small, subtle....
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thanks kubo I already touched it... and maybe Ill go fallout style with the backgoud with some kind of bleach colored buildings but I doubt it... just want to check little texture corrections + cig ( but I didnt touch the model of llips because I already thought it may be cheessy ) :D....

overall yea... the previous render is almost done... just shoulders + texture updates ....

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I like the "touch", but just to be a pain, how about some smoke on that cigarrete? just a specular with medium absortion would do the trick.... just a tiny bit of smoke ;)
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Smoke like a mushroom or a skull would be funny ;)

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very good !!!
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Face really nice idea... I ve read it after I made this one.... but I will think about it... :)

Its pure render :).... only slight color correction added



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BTW.....sorry guys my dropbox is down .... Ill repair it later....
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