Wanna play some pool?

[radiant]

Here is a scene that im making at the moment.
Just something that im doing in my free time.

Im going to be expanding in the number of pools and i might make a interior instead of a HDRi









And here is a time lapse

[youtube]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q78Qggw7hTY&feature=channel_video_title[/youtube]

[Sportler]

About the scene;

• Might be a over-used concept, but it looks cool anyway
• Too little roughness on the balls (look at reference below)
• The wood looks oversaturated (most of the scene does, actually)
• Somewhat noisy (Probably because this is in the WIP section)
• Good timelapse
• The cue looks too short
• Balls are also too specular

Hope it helps ^


This is not a render!

[radiant]

cheers , will do some changes. i might add some faint scratches to the balls

[ttaberna]

It looks soooo 3Dish
The stick is too short and the triangle has too sharp edges. It looks like it is rendered with a skanline engine.
Plus all Sportler said!
Cheers

[Sportler]

I suggest using a glossy material with a specular value of 0.015 and a roughness of 0.007
At least that's what I used for my billiard scene some time ago

[3rdeye]

overall I like it...nice work and thx for sharing the timelapse

3rdeye