Hello. I need your opinion about this rendering.
Thanks.
new kitchen project
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Ok my recommandations 
-It looks to dark, put some ceilling light in.
-Make the chrome-materials more look like chrome. More reflection. Make other materials more reflective as well.
-The picture needs more sharpness (aperture value of the camera set to zero or postproduction).
-Shift verticals.
-Generally more live: Maybe some plants or herbes ?
-Try to make it more juicy: All colors are in brown or grayscale and dark. It needs more friendly/ warm/ bright colors.
Kind regards
Alain
-It looks to dark, put some ceilling light in.
-Make the chrome-materials more look like chrome. More reflection. Make other materials more reflective as well.
-The picture needs more sharpness (aperture value of the camera set to zero or postproduction).
-Shift verticals.
-Generally more live: Maybe some plants or herbes ?
-Try to make it more juicy: All colors are in brown or grayscale and dark. It needs more friendly/ warm/ bright colors.
Kind regards
Alain
Intel Pentium 2.8 GHz 2 Cores, 8 GB RAM, GeForce GTX Titan 8GB, Blender 2.72b, Win 7 64 Bit
i just made some changes. i've added an emiter light on the cealling and few corection on photoshop.
c/c are wellcome.
thanks for your advices.
PT KERNEL 1hour 4000 PIX
c/c are wellcome.
thanks for your advices.
PT KERNEL 1hour 4000 PIX
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The chrome-material still does not look like chrome. It looks to flat and not enough reflective.
Do you use Octanes Daylightsystem ?
Where did you get this plant from ?
Kind regards
Alain
The chrome-material still does not look like chrome. It looks to flat and not enough reflective.
Do you use Octanes Daylightsystem ?
Where did you get this plant from ?
Kind regards
Alain
Intel Pentium 2.8 GHz 2 Cores, 8 GB RAM, GeForce GTX Titan 8GB, Blender 2.72b, Win 7 64 Bit
Just a simple texture environment light and emitter light on the celling, the plant is ready 3d model from http://archive3d.net/
CPU: INTEL i7 3.40 GHz/RAM: 8 GB/GPU: 2XGTX690/OS: WIN 7 64 BIT/SKETCHUP 2014/OCTANE for SU