Remington model 1858 revolver

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zivko
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i'd change to things. handle looks plastic, i'm not sure if its supposed to look like that. and thing is that gun should not be "standing on the handle" but lying down instead
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you might even concider adding some reflectivity to the surface gun and bullets are on, just to add more "depth" to the scene

other then that, its great, good job :)

edit: you could actually use more reflections on the gun too, try some different hdri. i think this one might give you better reflections, if you're missing light from above you can add blackbody light above http://www.openfootage.net/?p=144
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andersonix
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I like the gun, yet simple but cool.
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