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Daniel79
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what do you think about my render..
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necko77
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you must put trees, some exterior objects, enrich the scene, your aspfalt texture is too big to much repetiotons there, fance must be horizontal, not in slope like in you model,
you didnt insert background well,work on facade, work on glass on windows
keep working on it, you just started on this pics if you want good results
post your progress here

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Daniel79
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Thanks neckpo for your suggestion...
What have bad the glass of windows?...
what is "fance"?

Great,...
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more randomized house designs.
more trees/plants/ green 8-)
more detailed textures

nice work though :D
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