so i`ve been away for sometime and i saw the competition
here is a wip i`m working on
any C&C are always good:)
cheers,
Tudor
dream on (New Year's open themed still image competition)
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Hello there,
so i`ve been away for sometime and i saw the competition
here is a wip i`m working on
any C&C are always good:)
cheers,
Tudor
so i`ve been away for sometime and i saw the competition
here is a wip i`m working on
any C&C are always good:)
cheers,
Tudor
Win 7 Ultimate x64 | AMD Phenom II x4 810 2.60 Ghz | 8Gb Ram DDR3 | Archicad 16, Sketchup, Moi3d
It looks very nice - good job.
Just a few points I think you could improve. A mini bus in that environment should look dirty or at least have some dirt. At the moment it's as if it just came out the car wash. The same goes for the wheels lying around, the bicycle and even the girl.
The girls clothes is too shiny which makes her look kinda scary as if she's made of porcelain. The skin could look better as well, but I'm not sure if that's doable without SSS.
Just a few points I think you could improve. A mini bus in that environment should look dirty or at least have some dirt. At the moment it's as if it just came out the car wash. The same goes for the wheels lying around, the bicycle and even the girl.
The girls clothes is too shiny which makes her look kinda scary as if she's made of porcelain. The skin could look better as well, but I'm not sure if that's doable without SSS.
Win 7 64bit, GF 460 2GB, Intel quad, 4GB memory
i know. i`m working now on the carpaint,wheels and skin
thank you
thank you
Win 7 Ultimate x64 | AMD Phenom II x4 810 2.60 Ghz | 8Gb Ram DDR3 | Archicad 16, Sketchup, Moi3d
so here is an update. i don`t think i will modify the red paint on the bicycle.
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