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Mateuet
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This is a little restyling i want to make in my living room. Here you go!

This is one of the last renders for my portfolio, hope you like it!

Next time i'll make something else that archviz...i need some variation!

(I realize now that the direction of the light on the background is different than in the render , i'll change that)
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Daniel
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I think that judging by the angle of the light coming through, perhaps the light should be a little bit more orange due to the sunset. Or maybe it's morning, in which case the light is OK. The background threw my judgment of what time of day it was off a bit.
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3rdeye
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very nice house !!! .. where is the render ? .. hehe..beautifully lit work..

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tomas_p
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Looks cool but the forest is lit from the other site as the room. why??????????
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jnoftle123
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my only crit would be that your Normal map / or Bump map depending on what your are using for your table and black leather seems abit to hit, imo it should be more subtle
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kubo
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I love the combo concrete+wood, the floor I would go for a different finish, I guess it's a laminated floor, there is some nice ones with larger boards in white oak, or imitating old wood, but that's just the "desing" side, the render looks really good, and once you change the background it'll look perfect.
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