Colt M1911 Animation

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tschwenke
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Hi,

AK47 in production. Feedback for this welcome :)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EjQrhDKDWFk

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Nice job, but the gun is too clean. You should add more materials, scratches, specular maps,...
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Thanks :)
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Oh no, please keep it clean as is, thats a (great) demonstration, not a dirty bad game
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I don't thinking dirty but more reallistic...
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Kinda agree with ycarry didactics things don't go so well with realism.
Just a quick comment about your ignition volume. You should remap your temperature value to avoid this over burn white area kinda sad to loose every details in most interresting part.
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Hi,

Thanks for the feedback.

The AK-47 animation will feature some "dirty" parts. Hopefully, it will look great again.

Explosion is made brighter in post-production. I wanted it to have it that way because this is how explosions look.

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Thomas
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