Product Rendering for a company that produces parasols.
Any constructive comments are welcome
Product Rendering- Parasol
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If you do not want us to publish your art, please mention it in your post clearly. (put a very red small diagonal cross in the top left corner of the image)
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We recommend placing your credits on the images so you benefit from the exposure too, and use a minimum image width of 1200 pixels, and pathtracing or PMC. Thanks for your attention, The OctaneRender Team.
For new users: this forum is moderated. Your first post will appear only after it has been reviewed by a moderator, so it will not show up immediately.
This is necessary to avoid this forum being flooded by spam.
a good start 
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-there is no texture on the parasol or a natural sag - it appers to be made of tin
- the bracket ( scussion ) on the floor look like white plastic
- wood deck look like plywood with an exotic veneer applied
maybe use PT to get some depth in the adjacent spaces
-- and stop back from the object (not such a tight shot)
hope this helps and i hate when i post and i get no comments.
good work
-Wm
..and..
-there is no texture on the parasol or a natural sag - it appers to be made of tin
- the bracket ( scussion ) on the floor look like white plastic
- wood deck look like plywood with an exotic veneer applied
maybe use PT to get some depth in the adjacent spaces
-- and stop back from the object (not such a tight shot)
hope this helps and i hate when i post and i get no comments.
good work
-Wm
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