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Scottiefeng
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20 mins PT

Please comment for improvement.

Thanks
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Terryvfx
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The illumination is really nice! but the unsharp mask is out of control all the hard edges look straight out of a videogame.
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Terryvfx wrote:The illumination is really nice! but the unsharp mask is out of control all the hard edges look straight out of a videogame.

Thanks a lot Terry!

Just trying to fully understand your comments. Did you mean the picture is too grainy/blurry or something else? OR you meant the sharpness is not there?
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Hi, I think he meant the sharpening. See the black floor lamp at the corner: what is the glow around it?
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Builtdown wrote:Hi, I think he meant the sharpening. See the black floor lamp at the corner: what is the glow around it?
Yes. I see that. Thanks

Will work on this tonight.
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Builtdown wrote:Hi, I think he meant the sharpening. See the black floor lamp at the corner: what is the glow around it?
Is this one better?
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Hi,

Yeah, better!
Background is a lot better.

- the fountain looks like it´s floating
- peppers and the olive oil are floating
- maybe some coffee table on the carpet?
- maybe some DOF on the foreground chair?
- should there be a slit between ceiling and walls?
- the floor texture looks too small to my eyes. Maybe make it 100% larger
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Hello it's looking much much better! great job by the way one thing still weird to me is the ceiling normally you wont see a shadow like that around the corners it's just way too pronounce and distracting.
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Terryvfx wrote:Hello it's looking much much better! great job by the way one thing still weird to me is the ceiling normally you wont see a shadow like that around the corners it's just way too pronounce and distracting.

Thanks Terry. Appreciate your help.

I try to do shaowline cornice as requested by client. It is recess 10 mm into ceiling space.

Maybe the shadow is a bit too heavey
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Builtdown wrote:Hi,

Yeah, better!
Background is a lot better.

- the fountain looks like it´s floating
- peppers and the olive oil are floating
- maybe some coffee table on the carpet?
- maybe some DOF on the foreground chair?
- should there be a slit between ceiling and walls?
- the floor texture looks too small to my eyes. Maybe make it 100% larger
any other comments? One more try.

Thanks
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