C&C are welcome...
Done in C4D R17, Octane V3
Very Little Raw camera filter in photoshop...
Cheers,
FIrst Exterior night shot
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C4D 2025.1.1 Octane 2025.2.1 v1.5.1, <<2 X 3090 + NVlink>>, Windows 10, X399, AMD TR 1950X, 128 GB RAM, NVIDIA SD 552.22
https://www.behance.net/PaperArchitect
https://www.behance.net/PaperArchitect
Congrats on your first exterior.. it's not a bad start!
There are quite a few areas to improve on though. Generally I think the materials need a lot
of tweaking, too much glossyness and not enough imperfections.
The window drape looks a bit odd, more like a sail than a light drape flapping in the wind.
That light on the bicycle is pretty distracting and unnecessary, and I'm not quite sure where it's coming from either.
I'm not digging glares either, but that's maybe more of a personal thing. It cheapens it a bit for me at least.
Good luck in tweaking it and making it awesome!
There are quite a few areas to improve on though. Generally I think the materials need a lot
of tweaking, too much glossyness and not enough imperfections.
The window drape looks a bit odd, more like a sail than a light drape flapping in the wind.
That light on the bicycle is pretty distracting and unnecessary, and I'm not quite sure where it's coming from either.
I'm not digging glares either, but that's maybe more of a personal thing. It cheapens it a bit for me at least.
Good luck in tweaking it and making it awesome!
C4D R18 / C4D R19
AMD Ryzen Threadripper 1950X — MSI X399 Gaming Pro Carbon
MSI 1080 Ti FE — 2 x PALIT 980 Ti Super Jetstream
Corsair AXi 1500W — Corsair Vengence 32GB 3000MHz LED White
AMD Ryzen Threadripper 1950X — MSI X399 Gaming Pro Carbon
MSI 1080 Ti FE — 2 x PALIT 980 Ti Super Jetstream
Corsair AXi 1500W — Corsair Vengence 32GB 3000MHz LED White
Thank you, Chrmez
Thats the kind of comments I need.
Cheers
Thats the kind of comments I need.
Cheers
C4D 2025.1.1 Octane 2025.2.1 v1.5.1, <<2 X 3090 + NVlink>>, Windows 10, X399, AMD TR 1950X, 128 GB RAM, NVIDIA SD 552.22
https://www.behance.net/PaperArchitect
https://www.behance.net/PaperArchitect