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jcm21
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This is my first Octane render. Comments, tips, and suggestions are welcome.
I'm getting some odd shadowing around the column tops, only occurs when smoothing is active.
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kubo
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model looks good but IMO it needs a little more work on the textures, btw why the oven controls aren't aligned?
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jcm21
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The knobs on the 48" Wolf range are not all aligned. The lower knobs control the two ovens.
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radiance
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it's good but the lighting is a bit too uniform, did you use directlighting or pathtracing ?

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Ryoku
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I really like the lighting, looks so inviting. =] Good work
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jcm21
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Used pathtracing.
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