Fruits WIP !
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p3taoctane
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Looks nice
A couple of things might help. Some bump or displacement on the skin (and maybe the white area of the fruit and some 'wet look" on the fruit. Looks a little dry
Nice job none the less
A couple of things might help. Some bump or displacement on the skin (and maybe the white area of the fruit and some 'wet look" on the fruit. Looks a little dry
Nice job none the less
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itsallgoode9
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your oranges look like persimmons! 
so yeah, i think a bump would help. they just look too flat overall, especially compared to the shape of the orange wedges which look like they could not possibly fit in the peel
Persimmon:
so yeah, i think a bump would help. they just look too flat overall, especially compared to the shape of the orange wedges which look like they could not possibly fit in the peelPersimmon:
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p3taoctane
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I thought they were maderines or cuties as they are called at trader joes : > ))
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