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I love their products
These are only details, one woudn't notice if this wasn't single object in scene, but you wanted some crit so here it is
The black material is too glossy, it's more rough in real, with bit less bump.
On other hand the metallic part should be more reflective and have slighter bump (brushed surface).
And use studio setup instead of those planes, it creates smooth background, I would even suggest for lighter color(even white, but that is only preference, nothing wrong with going brown like you do) to create slightly bigger contrast in scene.
These are only details, one woudn't notice if this wasn't single object in scene, but you wanted some crit so here it is
The black material is too glossy, it's more rough in real, with bit less bump.
On other hand the metallic part should be more reflective and have slighter bump (brushed surface).
And use studio setup instead of those planes, it creates smooth background, I would even suggest for lighter color(even white, but that is only preference, nothing wrong with going brown like you do) to create slightly bigger contrast in scene.
Intel C4Q , 4G ram, GTX 285,
Very good renders.
Your models?
Your models?
I love Evermotion 
http://www.antoni3D.com
Win 7 64 |GTX 680 4 Gb (Display) | 3 x GTX690 4Gb | Intel i5 |Corsair 16GB
Win 7 64 |GTX 680 4 Gb (Display) | 3 x GTX690 4Gb | Intel i5 |Corsair 16GB