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puniska3030
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Posts: 31
Joined: Wed Jul 04, 2012 9:01 pm

need some help with manking my image more realistic.origianl render pathtraicing 3 hours no postwork..any helpfull suggestions
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gordonrobb
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Joined: Sat Mar 16, 2013 9:08 am

I'm no expert but to me there are two things that could be improved. First the geometry is too clean. Those edges are all too sharp and too straight. Secondly. Lst of your texturing is too flat. It could do with better texytures all rebound and maybe some noise, dirt shading at the edges. Maybe some bump or Normal or even displacement.

That's all I can offer. Lighting looks fine to me. But as I said, no expert :)
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