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pabloportorodrigues
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Hello everybody,

I'm working on that scene yet, but I want to post here some frames...

Hope you enjoy !

Thank you!


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Goldisart
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I like everything only - carpet - grass
pabloportorodrigues
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Thank Goldisart ,

Really the carpet in this scene this very ugly , I will try to change that ....

Thank you!
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how you did you get that bokeh effect?
pabloportorodrigues
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Goldisart wrote:I like everything only - carpet - grass

Thank Goldisart ,

Really the carpet in this scene this very ugly , I will try to change that ....

Thank you!
pabloportorodrigues
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enigmasi wrote:how you did you get that bokeh effect?

Hey enigmasi,


I made this using the parameter Thinlens Camera / Aperture and Aperture Edge.
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Hi pablo,
The carpet is ok
The car inside the living room is not.
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pabloportorodrigues
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bicket wrote:Hi pablo,
The carpet is ok
The car inside the living room is not.

Thank Bicket .

You could specify what is not good in the car so I can adjust ?
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Goldisart
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it seems to me that the very presence of the machine in the living room is not very logical.
it seems to me that the machine should stand either on the street or in the garage
Well, if once there run cleaners and begin to wash the car.

I think it is necessary to pay attention on wheels the machine. Strange reflections
pabloportorodrigues
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Goldisart wrote:it seems to me that the very presence of the machine in the living room is not very logical.
it seems to me that the machine should stand either on the street or in the garage
Well, if once there run cleaners and begin to wash the car.

I think it is necessary to pay attention on wheels the machine. Strange reflections

thanks for your reply and review ... but the idea of ​​having a car in the room was really deliberate, I used as a reference that image that I will post below , seems to me like a style or new fashion you know ?

now on the car picture, really will improve the texture of the wheels, thanks for the tip.


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