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pabloportorodrigues
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Hello everybody , I'm working on a scene for future work (WIP ) , I wonder what you think , and how can I improve this scene?

I'm trying to learn more about lighting and materials, but so far is what I got to do.

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Last edited by pabloportorodrigues on Fri Feb 20, 2015 11:22 am, edited 7 times in total.
pierpaolo
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Nice work, Pablo! ;)
yogiparish
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It looks great!

If you don't mind,may I point out two or three things I've noticed.
- The texture on the wall is cool. It looks really scruffy and worn down (in the third pic). On the other hand, the floor, the desk and the tables look super shiny and new. Maybe it helps if all the textures have the same kind of weathering effects applied to them.
- The chairs are perfectly aligned. Maybe by just offsetting and rotating them a slight bit might improve the realism of the image.
- Is the DOF Motion Blur?

Looking forward to your updates.
pabloportorodrigues
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Thanks guys , I'll see these settings you mentioned Yogiparish , thanks for the tips .

When I set the scene I post here again.

Thx.
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