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lukas8410
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Hi Guys/Girls!

I just wanted to share with You my newest Ident made in Octane, I hope that You'll enjoy it :)



Cheers,
Luke
// Behance: https://www.behance.net/LukaszKondek //

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glimpse
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Nice One, Luke!

though for me seems a bit long, I mean, all these moves last a bit too long (for my taste), maybe something more aggressive or shorter in the movement would be even better =) but that subjective thoughts, maybe it will be useful as c&c..if no just ignore =)
lukas8410
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Thanks Glimpse!

I appreciate Your words. Maybe You are right,
although I must admit that it was designed to
be little bit slower, because apart from being
an ident, it also serves a purpose of being
an intro to my showreel.

I'll think about it tough :)

Cheers,
Luke
// Behance: https://www.behance.net/LukaszKondek //

- Octane v3
- 1x Geforce 980 Ti , and 1x 570 GTX
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acc24ex
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pretty cool, great materials, but yeah you can punch it faster.. the light shouldn't really flicker when it turns on, I think it would be assumed it is and LED light, better to fade it in.. in the end you can hover the camera slowly an leave some suspense when you exit ..
- pretty nice all in all - suggestions are just a matter of taste now
lukas8410
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acc24ex thank You for Your comment!

It's great that You like it :)
Thank You for the words of
critic as well!

Cheers,
Luke
// Behance: https://www.behance.net/LukaszKondek //

- Octane v3
- 1x Geforce 980 Ti , and 1x 570 GTX
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