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This is necessary to avoid this forum being flooded by spam.
Good start, thanks for sharing. Great to see you are able to produce this kind of work in a short time. keep them coming
Win 11 64GB | NVIDIA RTX3060 12GB
Hello gamil,
your render is a nice start, but there some room for improvment.
1. You could place the car a bit more in the middle of the image.
2. Get rid of the DOF (it looks like a toycar).
3. Get rid of the chromed Rims, execpt its a Hiphopcruiser
4. The tires could be more black.
5. The car itself needs some more highlights on the front and back, even if it "comes out of the dark".
Maybe you try some differnt HDR´s or place some lights around the car?
6. The carfinish could shine a bit more.
7. Remove the licenseplate holder or put some onto it.
djart
your render is a nice start, but there some room for improvment.
1. You could place the car a bit more in the middle of the image.
2. Get rid of the DOF (it looks like a toycar).
3. Get rid of the chromed Rims, execpt its a Hiphopcruiser
4. The tires could be more black.
5. The car itself needs some more highlights on the front and back, even if it "comes out of the dark".
Maybe you try some differnt HDR´s or place some lights around the car?
6. The carfinish could shine a bit more.
7. Remove the licenseplate holder or put some onto it.
djart