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mantra
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I do not like some of the shaders that I did. But I can not understand how to do better.
Any ideas?
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hey.

shaders are quite good. You need to work on the light , and it will live :)
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couple of ideas:
make the bread more diffuse
find a way to melt that cheese and add a bit of reflection to it
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what software are you using.

Im asking becouse of melting that cheese . :)
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oh You have it in signature sorry.
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;)
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GeorgoSK
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It's the cheese that brings it down :) melting..maybe some texture.. ? and bit more smooth..

But if it helps...I got hungry from that picture :)
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GeoPappas
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I like the burger. It's very well done.

I would suggest putting the burger on a black background. The pink tray or plate bothers me for some reason.
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