Apartment-Living pmc 18000 sample
thx for look.
Apartment-Living PMC
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EricDesign
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nice work,
can you tell us resolution, time render with what cards, please?
can you tell us resolution, time render with what cards, please?
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Danielluther
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Floor are really made by smartly. Designs also be the fine on site of Eric. Looking forward to your designs.
Thank You
Thank You
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RealityFox
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Overall, nicely designed and good composition. I have two large critiques though: The first being the couch. It's plastic smooth and the material makes it look like it is plastic. Where are the wrinkles? The folds? It doesn't look like a leather couch and I just can't help but stare at it. My second biggest thing with it is the lighting and the overall reflectivity. It's all too much, you have bright windows and bright lights and a shiny ceiling, who leaves their lights on when it's so bright out? - Just something to think about, I would tone down those lights for sure though.
So those are my biggest issues, I would suggest maybe some material tweaking for the room but that's if you want to push the realism further.
If I ignore those issues I pointed out though, I can see a very nicely designed room/apartment, a good composition with the shot and good design choices for the furniture. So the scene has lots of great promise in it! I would definitely keep tweaking this :3
So those are my biggest issues, I would suggest maybe some material tweaking for the room but that's if you want to push the realism further.
If I ignore those issues I pointed out though, I can see a very nicely designed room/apartment, a good composition with the shot and good design choices for the furniture. So the scene has lots of great promise in it! I would definitely keep tweaking this :3