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ardian_ian
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MOSFET wrote:Hey Ian, it looks great but I would refrain from using that autofocus effect. It's the mark of a first year film student that has forgotten to set the camera to manual mode. Though it may look cool at first simply because the software makes it possible (similar to lens flares in Photoshop) it cheapens what is otherwise a well lit and composed scene. Also the quadrupal set of jump cuts at tthe 0:14 mark should be pare down to just one going from first wide to zoom then cut to the side view that starts at 0:17.
thanks for the advice man.. :)
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