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Jaroff
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Done for fun after reading.
Pathracing, render time 2h.

Hope You like it.
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p3taoctane
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I like this. Try some depth of field and some vignetting.
Break one of the wall lights to give it an ominous mood.

Strong composition
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Daniel
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I think the scene looks too comfortable being so well lit. I think it could benefit from no lighting except a headlamp or torchlight illuminating the scene.
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UnCommonGrafx
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Looks awfully cheery with such dreadful concepts. Quite a juxtaposition; I am unsure the artist was aiming for.
Fewer, dimmer lights seem apropos for a section of tunnel that has been deprecated.

For sure, your image invites the viewer to participate, as I have now done. . :roll:
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Zimshady
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Hmm not bad, i woud try to set one Light behind the train.
Eventualy Volumetric Ligh*Octane Fog* for atmosphere :mrgreen:
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Jaroff
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Thank You for comments - You right it's to light, so I've done some curve correction and added some filter.
I hope this picture looks a little bit better.

Best Regards!
Pozdrawiam!
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