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==Update 3/5/10==

Ok i did some more modeling.

Need to do:

Im planning on getting better bumps for the clock.
And i might make some books/pens/paper clips and a board on the wall.
And not make it a sun set.

Alot of unwrapping my way XD

Another week of school is on, that needs to come first in my list.
So i will update when i have the time.

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Hi,

Nice, but you should really try to make put a bit more time into your works, a bit more detail and 'finish' :)

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I got a list on what can make it better XD.

There is about eight things to do. Each one has another 5 sub things to it. :D
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Then you should post in the "Works In Progress" thread instead of the Gallery section.
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It didnt come to mind till i posted it on here.
But yeah, i guess this should be a WIP.

move the thread if ya like :D
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it's moved into WIPs.

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Do you actually model yourself or are you using free 3dmodels from somewhere? they all look very low-poly to me, good effort though but IMHO
and for to your improvement ;) you should start reading something about photography, lights and camera position, look some online magazine about products, check the way they organized the studio scene,where the light is coming from, etc..check photography or industrial design circles @ http://www.behance.net it's pure inspiration and It will indeed help your next to come scene , good luck!! :D
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Yeah inspiration form behance is great . Theres not even one single crap on this site . NOT EVEN ONE.
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Hi radiant. Can you give me this scene? :)
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yeah, but i have clustered it with new stuff, but yeah you can have it.
If you are going to post some examples.
Please wait till i have finished the new version.
Or just give me a pm on them.

I will Pm you

PS: I work in Blender 2.5/ And i use layers so check the layers on where the table/room is.
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