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cadvis
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Office visualization..AO3, HDRI, 100 samples. Hope you will enjoy.
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Leonardo
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Looks good, nice materials, very convincing lighting. Did it take very long?

If you're playing with the DOF, make sure to blur as well the background that you can see through the windows - the pylons look way too sharp, if the focus is on the table.

This is a composition comment: I would omit the bottles of water, they're too big and too many, and look very cheap. Put instead a tray with a glass bottle (a posh one like St. Pellegrino) and a set of glasses
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cadvis
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Thank you very much ~Leonardo for your constructive critique. Much appreciated. Will try to repost updated images as soon as I can.

It took about 1.5hr - modeling & rendering (5min rendering per frame, probably should leave it to cook for a bit longer to get rid of all of the noise but i couldn't wait :) ) + approx 0.5hr postpro (color correction, image background etc).

All the best.
kavorka
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those are the largest water bottles I have ever seen!!!

I think they can do something for the scene, just make them the actual size of a small water bottle.
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Alain
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I admit you to check out the proportions and messurements of the objects in your scene (for example bottles, chairs, ...) ;-)

Kind regards
Alain
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Leonardo
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Actually, those 'chairs' that you're showing are more like sofas, I don't think it's an adequate choice for a conference room, although they look very luxurious
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cadvis
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Hello,

Thank you very much all for your critique. Much appreciated. Will try to fix all the glitches as soon as I can.

Thanks you.
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