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manos
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hello, i'm a sketchup user.
this is one of my first projects made in max and marvelous designer.
i'm not a max master and wondered if max for octane supports instances like the stand alone edition.
i would be nice to have some tutorial for dirt, fog
and if theres a way to control the position of the background image.
it's not finished yet, but just wanted to shear and tell me what you think.
DL 7 min and 30 sec. on a gtx 690
Thanks.
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manos
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Nothing to say????????
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bepeg4d
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there is something strange in the black cloth simulation, it seems that a big piece is not affected :roll:
the camera is not the best, take the lines straight or exagerate the distortion :roll:
the light is a bit boring, maybe some emitters and or a good hdr, or a bit of sun... :roll:
ciao beppe
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Chris
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The concrete wall material looks a bit flat to me. Try using a bump or normal map. Perhaps a spec map as well. And the bump on the floor is a tad to much for my taste.

Chris
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