model into 3ds max 2009 x64, books done with bookmanager script.
add image, size 3600 x 2880 px, ao, direct light, 1000 maxsamples.
thank you to paquito for helps with the illumination, none post production, real image of octanerender standalone
regards
LIBRERO
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paoloverona
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really a good job Paquito, maybe a little too much tilt at the tiles of the floor but the scene is really nice
intel i7 3820 3.6GHz, 16Gb 1600Hz, windows 7 professional 64bit, gtx 580 3Gb x2, Octane 3dsMax 2.58
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merid888
paquito ?? is me, merida888, paquito just help me with the lights !!!
but, thank you for comment paolo
but, thank you for comment paolo
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paoloverona
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I was totally convinced to have wrote your name! 
....I apologize for that merid 
....I apologize for that merid intel i7 3820 3.6GHz, 16Gb 1600Hz, windows 7 professional 64bit, gtx 580 3Gb x2, Octane 3dsMax 2.58
That's a very nice image and framing. I agree with paolo's comment about the tilt on the floor tiles, it's too much. Upon closer look I also think the diffuse map in the floor is too small - the wood grain should appear much bigger.
Some of your books are taller than the shelf and stick out at the top; see the bottom left. I bet you noticed that too but it was too late to stop the render!
I also wonder if you could put some texture to the bookshelf material - is it wood? It looks a bit flat (like glossy plastic) to me, but this is more of a personal comment. If it was wood/laminate it wouldn't have such sharp edges. Maybe a very small chamfer (like 1mm) to its edges?
Very effective lighting. Is the window a portal? do you have an emitter behind the camera?
Some of your books are taller than the shelf and stick out at the top; see the bottom left. I bet you noticed that too but it was too late to stop the render!
I also wonder if you could put some texture to the bookshelf material - is it wood? It looks a bit flat (like glossy plastic) to me, but this is more of a personal comment. If it was wood/laminate it wouldn't have such sharp edges. Maybe a very small chamfer (like 1mm) to its edges?
Very effective lighting. Is the window a portal? do you have an emitter behind the camera?
Z77 - i7 2600K - 16Gb | iGPU HD3000 | GTX580 + GTX590
Win7 HP 64 | Sketchup 8 - Octane standalone v1.16
Win7 HP 64 | Sketchup 8 - Octane standalone v1.16
very nice work mate !!
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merid888
jbavar thank you for comment
hi leonardo, i can do the render again,making change like woods, and bookshef, the time was 2 minutes 48 seconds for the image, is a short time with the gtx690, the light is just an emisor in the windows, none behind camera
3rdeye thank you for for comment
i'll make the change and i'll upload again
paolo don't ask apologies
hi leonardo, i can do the render again,making change like woods, and bookshef, the time was 2 minutes 48 seconds for the image, is a short time with the gtx690, the light is just an emisor in the windows, none behind camera
3rdeye thank you for for comment
i'll make the change and i'll upload again
paolo don't ask apologies
So the window is the emitter? Or is it an emitter plane behind the window?
Very effective anyway (less than 3 minutes!), me quito el sombrero!
Very effective anyway (less than 3 minutes!), me quito el sombrero!
Z77 - i7 2600K - 16Gb | iGPU HD3000 | GTX580 + GTX590
Win7 HP 64 | Sketchup 8 - Octane standalone v1.16
Win7 HP 64 | Sketchup 8 - Octane standalone v1.16
Nice work, you applied the light quite well. I like the result 
AMD FX8350 8 cores. 16GBs RAM
GTX690
Win8 64.
GTX690
Win8 64.